Well, 2017 is drawing to a close and it's time to recap the year with all the writing related and travel that I did. It was a busy year, partly because mid-way I had to move out of the place where I'd been for the past year which was unsuitable, unsettling and a hindrance to my creativity. Fortunately I was able to find a quiet place in Sapperton, the old part of New Westminster which is the city next to Vancouver. It is a quiet, serene place in a friendly neighborhood and finally I was able to get back to my writing.
During the summer I didn't do much book promo but I did have my book launch for SHADOW OF THE LION: THE FIELDS OF HADES in June and later a table at Greek Days to display it.
At the first of July I had a table at a book festival in Fort Langley, a suburban town outside of Vancouver. Since then I've done a couple of readings but now the new year approaches I'm making more effort to apply for readings and workshops.
Meanwhile, I'm working on my other novel DRAGONS IN THE SKY and would like to complete it for sure this year! I have also negotiated with my publisher to try and get him to put SHADOW OF THE LION (both volumes) into soft cover but the plan he has proposed is not suitable so I am facing this big decision for the first of the year of what will happen. I am not going to rewrite it or chop it to pieces to put it into an 'Abridged' version, but I will try to get it published as an ebook.
I also still instructing a couple of writing group and I'm considering advertising for others including more travel writing workshops.
My travels were limited this year to three weeks in Greece so I haven't done much travel writing. I am sorry to say that the Greek Islands ebook I worked on for over a year came to a halt suddenly when the American publisher dropped all contact with me. I will eventually publish it myself when I get time to finish it. My other ebook ATHENS AND BEYOND is avaiable on Kindle.
The highlights of my time in Greece were the three readings I did, one at the Canadian Institute, one for the Athens centre and I read to a grade nine class of 50 students at the Athens Community School as well as giving a writer's workshop for a smaller group of older students.
The biggest thrill of all was my three day visit to Iraklion Crete when I finally got to meet one of my writer/mentor's in person after many years of being only in contact on-line. Dr Jack Dempsey is an authority on the Minoans and has been a great supporter during my writing and publishing of SHADOW. We spent a wonderful afternoon together talking and sharing our writing stories and adventures. I'm hoping to see him again next year as he now lives in Crete (was originally from US).
So this about wraps up the activities and plans for the future in my writing career. And I hope to be more diligent in posting blogs in the coming year as well.
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Tuesday, December 26, 2017
THE WRITER'S REPORT FOR 2017
Well, 2017 is drawing to a close and it's time to recap the year with all the writing related and travel that I did. It was a busy year, partly because mid-way I had to move out of the place where I'd been for the past year which was unsuitable, unsettling and a hindrance to my creativity. Fortunately I was able to find a quiet place in Sapperton, the old part of New Westminster which is the city next to Vancouver. It is a quiet, serene place in a friendly neighborhood and finally I was able to get back to my writing.
During the summer I didn't do much book promo but I did have my book launch for SHADOW OF THE LION: THE FIELDS OF HADES in June and later a table at Greek Days to display it.
At the first of July I had a table at a book festival in Fort Langley, a suburban town outside of Vancouver. Since then I've done a couple of readings but now the new year approaches I'm making more effort to apply for readings and workshops.
Meanwhile, I'm working on my other novel DRAGONS IN THE SKY and would like to complete it for sure this year! I have also negotiated with my publisher to try and get him to put SHADOW OF THE LION (both volumes) into soft cover but the plan he has proposed is not suitable so I am facing this big decision for the first of the year of what will happen. I am not going to rewrite it or chop it to pieces to put it into an 'Abridged' version, but I will try to get it published as an ebook.
I also still instructing a couple of writing group and I'm considering advertising for others including more travel writing workshops.
My travels were limited this year to three weeks in Greece so I haven't done much travel writing. I am sorry to say that the Greek Islands ebook I worked on for over a year came to a halt suddenly when the American publisher dropped all contact with me. I will eventually publish it myself when I get time to finish it. My other ebook ATHENS AND BEYOND is avaiable on Kindle.
The highlights of my time in Greece were the three readings I did, one at the Canadian Institute, one for the Athens centre and I read to a grade nine class of 50 students at the Athens Community School as well as giving a writer's workshop for a smaller group of older students.
The biggest thrill of all was my three day visit to Iraklion Crete when I finally got to meet one of my writer/mentor's in person after many years of being only in contact on-line. Dr Jack Dempsey is an authority on the Minoans and has been a great supporter during my writing and publishing of SHADOW. We spent a wonderful afternoon together talking and sharing our writing stories and adventures. I'm hoping to see him again next year as he now lives in Crete (was originally from US).
So this about wraps up the activities and plans for the future in my writing career. And I hope to be more diligent in posting blogs in the coming year as well.
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Monday, September 11, 2017
BACK TO GREECE AND MORE WRITING
I'm heading back to Greece for three week and while I'm there I am schedule to do three readings of SHADOW OF THE LION: THE FIELDS OF HADES at the American Community School, the Athens Centre and the Canadian Institute. I'll read segments from SHADOW OF THE LION: BLOOD ON THE MOON as well.
KNOSSOS
Plaka Beach, NAXOS
It's been a hectic last year with problems at my old home and a move mid July. But I'm all settled again in a quiet, peaceful apartment in a lovely suburban neighbouhood. During the past year I had little incentive work on my current novel DRAGONS IN THE SKY. Instead I spend almost a year writing an ebook on the Greek Islands for a US publisher, under contract. I was almost finished it and he suddenly abandoned me. So I have shelved the project and will finish and self-publish it later.
Now that I'm resettled, I have started back on DRAGONS after a year's break from it. A tricky project trying to get back into the cadence of the prose but I am forging ahead and after my trip I will dedicate all my time to it.
Be sure and order my SHADOW OF THE LION double volume novel. A good place to get it (with no shopping costs) is the Book Depository. But if you check prices you can sometimes get deals on Amazon including second-hand copies which are in almost new condition. One that I ordered had even been previously signed by me!
Meanwhile, you can also get my travel guide ATHENS AND BEYOND on Kindle.
Tuesday, October 20, 2015
BACK IN ACTION!
Well here I am again after several months absence! I left my home the end of August for an extended trip to Europe, starting with London which included a walking tour of the Cotswolds. Then on to Caerphilly Wales to visit cousins. From Cardiff I flew to Alicante Spain and was met by my travel writer friend Inka who hosted me at her home in Torrevieja for several days. Then I traveled by bus to Malaga where I stayed with friends from Vancouver who run an English school there. On Sept. 10 I flew to Athens, Greece where I spent the rest of my vacation which was partly fun and partly writing related work. I went to Naxos for a week of rest and meditation, staying 3 days in a bed-tent at Maragas beach and 3 days in a lovely hotel near Agia Ana. Managed to draft 5 poems and the beginnings of a new chapter for my current w.i.p. Dragons in the Sky.
There were many highlights of this wonderful trip but mainly I want to refer to those related to my writing. That is, the excellent reading I was invited to do at the Canadian Institute on Oct 7 in Athens. This was quite a thrill for me. A week earlier I'd been introduced to a group of Greek academics at the Hellenic Institute for Strategies and was treated like a visiting celeb. Many of them attended my reading of SHADOW OF THE LION: BLOOD ON THE MOON at the Canadian Institute.
I have been so well received by the Greeks and by these organizations in Athens who invited me to read. The Canadian Institute has invited me to return next year when book two THE FIELDS OF HADES is published. And I also received another invitation from the Athens Centre where I read last year.
I had many adventures on this trip and most of them were related to finding new travel writing ideas. I'll be posting on my http://travelthroughhistory.blogspot.com soon but here's one of the highlights from Greece related to historical writing.
A visit to the Cave of Euripides
The Greek poet/dramatist Euripides was born on the island of Salamina and live for a while in cave up on the mountainside. When I went to visit my friend on Salamina she told me about climbing to the cave but said it was a steep climb. This year I was determined to make an attempt to reach it. It turned out to be not as difficult as I'd anticipated as it was a switchback trail. What a thrill it was to stand outside the cave where this renown writer had penned some of his famous dramas! Apparently there were nine rooms in the cave. You aren't allowed to venture in now as it would be dangerous because of some erosion. But just to stand there and take in the magnificent view down the mountain toward the sea was an inspiring experience for me.
I'll post more writing news here soon. I'm scheduled to go on a radio program next week for World Poetry to talk about my adventures and the book. SHADOW OF THE LION: BLOOD ON THE MOON has been well received and I'm anticipating the next volume to be ready by next year. Hope to start the final edits on it soon! While I Athens I also visited some bookstores to inquire about translations and gathered a bit of info for my publisher. The Greeks are very anxious to see this novel translated so I hope this eventually will be possible.
Meanwhile, the book promo goes on. This week I'll volunteer at the Surrey International Writer's Conference which will give me a chance to schmooze and make some new literary contacts.
My writing classes have resumed and soon I hope to be offering some more workshops.
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Wednesday, October 29, 2014
A SUCCESSFUL BOOK PROMO TOUR TO GREECE & MORE ACCOLADES
My first stop overseas was a visit to my cousin's in Wales. One night we had a small get-together in a pub and one of my cousins brought her copy of SHADOW OF THE LION: BLOOD ON THE MOON for me to sign. That was a thrill, signing my very first book, and with my special golden Horus pen that I'd bought in Egypt.
After attending the Historical Novel Writers Conference in London (Set 5,6) I went to Greece to visit, promote SHADOW and do some research for the Athens Guide e-book I'm working on for an American publisher.
My first stop in Greece was a quick trip up to Thessaloniki where I attended a poetry book launch of a Vancouver Greek/Can poet friend Manolis Aligizakis. The next day I delivered a copy of SHADOW to the Society of Macedonian studies and then I toured around the city. This included a stop at the statue of Alexander the Great at the harbour of course, and later a tour around to see Kamal Ataturk's house and some other sights.
I was very fortunate to be received so heartily by the Greeks and was invited by the directors, in particular Joanna Theiakou, to do a reading at the Athens Centre (Sept 24) after which there was a reception. There was a very good attendance and this included some people from the Canadian Archaeological Institute. I have to thank my friend Zoe Loukopoulous for setting this up for me and putting me in touch with the right people.
Two days later I headed up to Larissa where I was invited to present my book at a World Poetry Peace conference. I spent a delightful evening there with Chryssa Velissariou, my hostess and friends. Then back to Athens on the train the next day. That contact was thanks to Ariadne Sawyer who is in charge of World Poetry here in Vancouver. I have been on her radio program and she introduced me to Chyrssa through FB.
Also thanks to my friend Zoe, I was put in touch with Steve Madeiros, dean of the American Community School in Athens. We had a meeting and he was enthusiastic about me coming to read to the students. So on my last day in Athens I went and read to two double-sized grade nine kids. They were very receptive, asking interesting questions. All the staff at the school were so warm and friendly and I really enjoy my morning there.
Most of my time in Greece was spent in Athens either planning the readings or doing research for the Athens Guide. I did make a 3 day visit to Salamina and enjoyed exploring archaeological sites with my friend Christina. And one day my friend Carole Barkas, hostess of the B&B where I was staying, invited me to join her on a senior tour up the coast to visit 3 volcanic islands off the north tip of Euboeia. Carole had also invited me to read for a couple of her reading group friends. And she was very helpful in promoting the book, even ordered a box to sell for me there.
I stopped in at Mainz, Germany for a couple of days enroute home to visit my friend Patrick and do more touring for travel articles material. Then home. And the excitement continued.
On Oct 19 I was awarded an 'empowered writers' award at the World Poetry Peace Poethon here in Vancouver. I have a certificate and cute little golden 'Oscar' which sits on the coffee table by SHADOW. That was thanks to Ariadne Sawyer who nominated me for the award. A big honour!
Meanwhile the publisher says he has sent a copy of the book to Oliver Stone because so many people say what a great movie or TV series it would make! And the Greek Consul, Mr Ilias Kremmydas, has been helping me organize my official book launch which will be on January 14 at the Hellenic Centre here in Vancouver. Meanwhile he told me to send my info to the Greek attache in Ottawa and she has responded with an invitation for me to come to the East (Montreal, Ottawa, Toronto) on a reading tour as there are large Greek communities there. I am definitely going to plan for that and will organize something with her for later in the Spring.
I did one reading here when I got back, and there's another coming up in two weeks. I have been busy sending out promo material about the book and will be seeing my brother-in-law this weekend as he has offered to be my publicist. Lots to do even though the book is published so there seems no end to it and I'll appreciate the help.
Remember you can get the books at local bookstores if you ask them to order it. In the States or UK they may be on the shelves of main bookstores. In Canada Coles or Chapters will order them. Or get them thru Amazon.com The local libraries will also be stocking them.
After attending the Historical Novel Writers Conference in London (Set 5,6) I went to Greece to visit, promote SHADOW and do some research for the Athens Guide e-book I'm working on for an American publisher.
My first stop in Greece was a quick trip up to Thessaloniki where I attended a poetry book launch of a Vancouver Greek/Can poet friend Manolis Aligizakis. The next day I delivered a copy of SHADOW to the Society of Macedonian studies and then I toured around the city. This included a stop at the statue of Alexander the Great at the harbour of course, and later a tour around to see Kamal Ataturk's house and some other sights.
I was very fortunate to be received so heartily by the Greeks and was invited by the directors, in particular Joanna Theiakou, to do a reading at the Athens Centre (Sept 24) after which there was a reception. There was a very good attendance and this included some people from the Canadian Archaeological Institute. I have to thank my friend Zoe Loukopoulous for setting this up for me and putting me in touch with the right people.
Two days later I headed up to Larissa where I was invited to present my book at a World Poetry Peace conference. I spent a delightful evening there with Chryssa Velissariou, my hostess and friends. Then back to Athens on the train the next day. That contact was thanks to Ariadne Sawyer who is in charge of World Poetry here in Vancouver. I have been on her radio program and she introduced me to Chyrssa through FB.
Also thanks to my friend Zoe, I was put in touch with Steve Madeiros, dean of the American Community School in Athens. We had a meeting and he was enthusiastic about me coming to read to the students. So on my last day in Athens I went and read to two double-sized grade nine kids. They were very receptive, asking interesting questions. All the staff at the school were so warm and friendly and I really enjoy my morning there.
Most of my time in Greece was spent in Athens either planning the readings or doing research for the Athens Guide. I did make a 3 day visit to Salamina and enjoyed exploring archaeological sites with my friend Christina. And one day my friend Carole Barkas, hostess of the B&B where I was staying, invited me to join her on a senior tour up the coast to visit 3 volcanic islands off the north tip of Euboeia. Carole had also invited me to read for a couple of her reading group friends. And she was very helpful in promoting the book, even ordered a box to sell for me there.
I stopped in at Mainz, Germany for a couple of days enroute home to visit my friend Patrick and do more touring for travel articles material. Then home. And the excitement continued.
On Oct 19 I was awarded an 'empowered writers' award at the World Poetry Peace Poethon here in Vancouver. I have a certificate and cute little golden 'Oscar' which sits on the coffee table by SHADOW. That was thanks to Ariadne Sawyer who nominated me for the award. A big honour!
Meanwhile the publisher says he has sent a copy of the book to Oliver Stone because so many people say what a great movie or TV series it would make! And the Greek Consul, Mr Ilias Kremmydas, has been helping me organize my official book launch which will be on January 14 at the Hellenic Centre here in Vancouver. Meanwhile he told me to send my info to the Greek attache in Ottawa and she has responded with an invitation for me to come to the East (Montreal, Ottawa, Toronto) on a reading tour as there are large Greek communities there. I am definitely going to plan for that and will organize something with her for later in the Spring.
I did one reading here when I got back, and there's another coming up in two weeks. I have been busy sending out promo material about the book and will be seeing my brother-in-law this weekend as he has offered to be my publicist. Lots to do even though the book is published so there seems no end to it and I'll appreciate the help.
Remember you can get the books at local bookstores if you ask them to order it. In the States or UK they may be on the shelves of main bookstores. In Canada Coles or Chapters will order them. Or get them thru Amazon.com The local libraries will also be stocking them.
Friday, August 08, 2014
SHADOW OF THE LION: Blood on the Moon, Now available on Amazon.com
Here's the big news:
SHADOW OF THE LION, Blood on the Moon is listed on Amazon. Surprised it's a hard cover. Pretty exciting though! Official release day, August 11.
http://www.amazon.com/SHADOW-OF-THE-LION-BLOOD/dp/0992715512/ref=sr_1_fkmr1_1?ie=UTF8&qid=1407528500&sr=8-1-fkmr1&keywords=Shadow+of+the+Lion+Volume+1+Blood+on+the+Moon
Tuesday, November 12, 2013
The Celts and the Greeks: Connecting the Dots
In researching my work-in-progress novel 'DRAGONS IN THE SKY' I have tried to connect the Celtic people with the Greeks. In the story, Olwen an acolyte of the Druids, is snatched from her village by a renegade chieftain after she witnesses him murder his brother. He takes her on a ship across the Narrow Sea using her as his talisman as he makes his was eastward across Europe and south toward Macedonia where he hears a king is recruiting an army. Near the boarder of Macedonia she is rescued by a young hunter who is Alexander. But how much connection was there between the people of southern Europe and the northern Celtic tribes?
Pytheas of Massalia
In the 4th century BC, a Greek geographer and explorer from the Greek colony of Massalia (modern day Marseilles) made a voyage of exploration to northwestern Europe. In this voyage he travelled around and visited a considerable part of Britain. He's the first person on record to describe the 'midnight sun". The existence of an area where the nights are very short in summer and the sun does not set at the summer solstice was already known. Reports from this country of the Hyperboreans had been reaching the Mediterranean for some centuries, but Pytheas is the first known scientific visitor to report the arctic polar ice and information of the Germanic tribes. His account of the tides is the earliest relating them to the moon.
(this book is available on Amazon)Pytheas was a Greek geographer. He wrote a book about his voyage but it has not survived. All we have are references in the works of later classic writers. Where he started his voyage is a mystery because in those days the Carthaginians had closed the Straits of Gibraltar for all ships from other nations. He may have travelled overland or sailed only at night. He travelled to Cornwall, w hich was then the source of tin, and there he studied and wrote about the production and procession of tin. He circumnavigated Britain, sailing north to an island called "Thule". It may have been part of the Norwegian coast although Iceland, the Shetlands and the Faeroes have also been identified by historians. He noted that Thule was an agricultural country that produced honey. It was the place where the sun went to sleep and the congealed sea began. He spoke of the waters around Thule being like a 'marine lung' which actually means jellyfish. Modern scientists believe that he tried to describe ice cakes that are formed at the edge of drift ice. He noted that the inhabitants of Thule ate fruits and drank milk and made a drink out of grain and honey (mead.)
After completely his survey of Britain (called Albion then), he travelled to the continental North Sea coast. He may have also visited the Baltic. And he visited an island which was the source of amber (probably Helgoland).
He wrote a book about his voyage but that has not survived. We only have the remarks of others, among them Strabo who (unjustly) called Pytheas a liar.
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Wednesday, May 22, 2013
THE LONG, ARDUOUS JOURNEY

I'm really feeling as though I'm living Olwen's life at the moment: that long, arduous journey she was taken on, far from her home, across Europe to Macedonia. This journey of publishing is like that - charting unknown territories, hoping for a 'friendly' interaction, wondering when and if it will come to a satisfactory end. IPOMONI: Patience, is my mantra. So far, I've sent out dozens of queries to publishers and agents and have received very few responses most of them, til now, negatives. Although I did have a moment of excitement a few weeks ago when one published sent me a contract. Turns out it wasn't a good choice. In fact, they hadn't even read my manuscript. And after thoroughly examining the fine print, I decided it was definitely not one to accept.
Then, this weekend when I was feeling down about it and actually had to force myself to send more queries out, I was surprised to receive and immediate reply from a UK publisher requesting to see the whole manuscript. This is a big plus. A foot in the door, at least. And the bonus was, in the letter they sent me, it said that the director of the company is fond of that same history and has read many of the books I used for research or enjoy reading on the subject, such as Mary Renault's books. So, at the moment I am again feeling more 'hopeful'. Of course, I won't know anything for sure for about 3 more months! That's the way it goes in this business. Meanwhile, it's coming up for the anniversary of Alexander's death (June 10) so I am hoping he'll send me some luck!
ALEXANDER, as a youth
At the moment I haven't been working on "Dragons in the Sky" as I have felt a bit out-of-steam with the writing. For a couple of weeks my computer was in the shop being fixed and I sort of lost my enthusiasm for writing. And since getting it back in running order I've been catching up on travel stories for EuropeUpClose. But I am trying to get myself back in the mood for Olwen's story again. This is a picture of Alexander as he would have looked at the time she meets him, when he was a young teen-ager.
I have actually written the part where she does meet Philip but that's as far as I have written so far. Perhaps I'll take a break from it until after my holidays. I'm heading for England & Wales on June 8 and then going on to Greece June 14. I'm sure I'll get lots of inspiration along the way, do a bit more research for the novel and for more travel stories. And maybe I'll even write some more blogs!
Monday, August 13, 2012
GOING FOR THE GOLD!
Gold Coin: Alexander. Babylon
It's now official. After all those years of work, my novel Shadow of the Lion is now in the hands of an agent. I have my writer friend Scott Oden to thank for this, something for which I am eternally grateful. I also thank those historical fiction writers who have emailed me with encouragement: Steven Pressfield and Dr. John (Jack)Dempsey, as well as my many friends and others in the writing community of Vancouver.
It's been a long, long journey and now I am on the road to the 'finish line' I am going for the gold!
I think Shadow deserves it. This book is for Alexander, and the Greeks. And I hope it's a winner!
Of course, one must face the possibility of disappointments, but I am staying positive and hope for the best because I know it is a worthy project and I put my whole heart and soul into it.
I just packed away the manuscript boxes that have been on my side board for months. I lit some incense, as Scott suggested, and put it in front of my statuette of Apollo and two small mementos of the royal tombs at Vergina: one with a gold image of Philip, Alexander's father and the other with the gold sixteen pointed star of Macedon.
So now I'm taking Steven Pressfield's wise advice and I've already started to focus on my other work-in-progress, Dragons in the Sky. I'll write more about it in days to come. I know I'm going to miss all my friends from Shadow, but it's great to be back with Olwen again because her story is almost like a time-travel back to my own roots. And yes, there is an Alexander connection in it.
Apollo
Tuesday, May 29, 2012
THE END OF THE JOURNEY
The Macedonian Empire of Alexander the Great, 323 BC
Very soon my manuscript of "Shadow of the Lion" will begin is journey out into the world. It's been a long adventure that has taken as many years to complete as it did for Alexander to conquer the world. He had many victories, no defeats, until death took him unexpectedly and suspiciously at the age of 33 in Babylon. That is where my journey began, and it retraced his footsteps all the way back to Macedon ending in the year 310 BC.
I've enjoyed the journey. Being a travel writer as well as a writer of historical fiction, I used some of my research trips as an opportunity to write travel stories as well. And I have written journals full of the details of these adventures. My acknowledgements in the front of the novel will include thanks to the many people who helped me with my research including the Greeks themselves: the Greek Ministry of Culture, and Ministry of Tourism (who provided me with a free ticket to Greece in 1993 to complete my research), and an interview granted at the Society of Macedonian Studies in Thessaloniki. As well, I had help from the Finnish Institute, my friend Petra who was assistant director at the time who helped me get a museum pass, and Margaret, a friend who worked at the British School Library who granted me permission to research in their archives. I also got a chance to research at the Gennadius Library and had help from a great many other Classical scholars and friends in Greece who cheered me on and gave me so much encouragement.
During the long process of writing the novel I was helped by my Scribblers Writing Critique Group who did as always an expert job of helping me edit and improve the text. Without their encouragement I may have given up on it a long time ago, expect that I had this burning need to tell the story of what happened after Alexander died. Long ago I read Mary Renault's"Funeral Games" and always felt that it was lacking, somehow, compared to many of her other excellent novels, especially "Fire From Heaven". I had been 'in love with' Alexander since the age of 16 and inspired to write about him. My first Alexander themed novel was written when I was in my last year of high school and that got me started on pursuing the story of his life. "Shadow of the Lion" is what happened to his only legal heir and all the others close to him after his death, ending with the fall of his dynasty. I was lucky to live in Greece for part of the time I was researching and able to visit all of the places there, and some in Asia Minor, where the story takes place. The rest , Iraq (Babylon) Syria and Egypt (Alexandria) I had to rely on texts, videos and lots of research to set the stage.
As I reach the end of the task, now polishing the synopsis, I am feeling this great sense of relief and the urge to set it free so I can move on to my next project, an half-finished novel that also has an Alexander theme, which I set aside in order to work on Shadow. This one is a Celtic novel, told in the first person, "Dragons in the Sky". And then I am planning to write another about Alexander's mother, Olympias. That one will be titled "The Black Dove".
I'm not traveling to Greece this summer as I usually do because I invested my money in a professional editor who has done a magnificent job of helping me fine-tune the novel. So now I send it on it's way I hope that a publisher will pick it up and give it the publicity it deserves. If that fails, after a good try, I'll consider self-publishing. I know Shadow of the Lion is an excellent novel and it is almost what you would call my 'life's work'. So it deserves to be shown to a wide audience.
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Saturday, January 28, 2012
PUTTING THE FINAL TOUCHES ON "SHADOW OF THE LION"
Bust of young Alexander, Pella
I'm starting my final round of edits and cutting of my novel "Shadow of the Lion" before handing it over to the professional editor. It's been a long, difficult job going through it starting with all the workshopping and rewrites I did while writing it, followed by the first reader's critique. Then, when I'd gone through editing her suggestions, another reader's critique with more detailed corrections. That editing was strictly focusing on more cuts, spell checks and line edits. Now I'm going through it again to see what more I can cut, as somehow in spite of dropping whole chapters the word count doesn't seem to shrink as much as I thought it would!
This is Where the Story Begins: Babylon
And the Death of Alexander, June 323 BC: Alexander's funeral carriage
Until you get yourself totally absorbed in the editing as I've been, you don't realize what a painstaking job it can be! The writer is finished her work now and this last round of editing was much easier because of it. I am able to detach myself and be more critical, spotting repetitious phrases, unnecessary information etc. One of the problems with historical fiction is that the writer often puts too much of their research into the story when it isn't really necessary.
Because I workshopped it at my Scribbler's critique group all the way through, and worked in 'blocks', by the time it was completed in December 2010, I didn't need to do much rewriting. It has been mainly the cutting and tightening up, disposing of passages that were not really needed -- sort of 'overloads' of information. Although most of those chapters that I dropped were really interesting and I enjoyed writing them, it was a matter of necessity to let them go.
So now I'm almost finished with it other than what the professional editor will have to suggest before I start pitching it out into the big wide world of publishers. The only things I have left to write, are the acknowledgements, afterword and compiling my glossary and cast list (which are mostly done). And then I'll brush up my synopsis at bit more. Then it's done! And I have to say I will be very relieved and happy to have it off my hands so I can focus on my other work-in-progress "Dragons in the Sky" which you'll be hearing more about in my blog soon.
This is Where the Story Ends: The fortress of Amphipolis, Macedonia
The River Strymon, Amphipolis
Sunday, September 04, 2011
LAMENT FOR THE OLD ONES
Note: Another poem from my collection "Songs for Erato". I used to live in the Plaka, Athens and spend a lot of time there each time I am back in the city. It used to be a place where my friends and I partied and for us women, there was no end of attention from all the handsome Adonis who hung out or worked at the tavernas there. I wrote this poem one day while sitting at a souvlaki ship reminiscing about the old times.
What has happened to those beautiful Greek boys,
those Adonis who used to
captivate us with their sweet talk?
on broken plates
and later broke our hearts?
Are they these bald, grey-haired, unshaven men
who laze away their days at kafeneions
bemoaning the state of the economy,
reminiscing of the days
they sailed boldly into foreign ports
like pirates,
seducing the local girls?
enough of them
to make a girl’s head dizzy,
oozing their Mediterranean charm.
Where are those beautiful gods?
Where is Eros
who struck our hearts with
his golden arrows?
Now they work in tavernas on hot summer days
slogging beer and souvlaki to tourists
while I sit and watch
remembering those golden days
when Plaka Square was filled
with laughter and love.
Written in Plaka Square, Athens.
My friend Aris who I have known since my first trip to Greece in 1979. He's retired now and gone to live in Patras. I miss him!
The Plaka, Athens Greece
LAMENT FOR THE OLD ONES
those Adonis who used to
captivate us with their sweet talk?
Where are the Zorbas
who danced with passionon broken plates
and later broke our hearts?
who laze away their days at kafeneions
bemoaning the state of the economy,
reminiscing of the days
they sailed boldly into foreign ports
like pirates,
seducing the local girls?
They used to loll in Plaka Square,
kamakis poised,enough of them
to make a girl’s head dizzy,
oozing their Mediterranean charm.
Today I see only tired old men,
ancient as their myths.Where are those beautiful gods?
Where is Eros
who struck our hearts with
his golden arrows?
slogging beer and souvlaki to tourists
while I sit and watch
remembering those golden days
when Plaka Square was filled
with laughter and love.
(note: a kamaki is a 3-pronged fishing spear. The guys who go out 'fishing' for women are nicknamed Kamakis)
The Plaka at Night
DELPHI'S MAGIC
Note: Almost every time I visit Greece I make a pilgrimage to Delphi. But this poem is written about my very first visit there, when I spent the night on the mountainside with a friend. Delphi is one of the most sacred places on Earth and the ancient Greeks actually considered it the 'navel of the earth', with a carved navel stone to symbolize this.
Delphi's Magic
and put them on the stone ledge
with the grapes,
sweet grapes from Delphi’s vines.
clambered over
shrubs and granite
to find a place to sleep
beneath the stars.
and laid among the holly oaks.
We would not know til morning
that we had made our bed
on the chasm’s edge.
The full moon shone on us
We watched meteors
shower golden trails
across the heavens.
We felt the presence of the gods
understood the mystery
that brings men to this
Sacred shrine.
And every trip I make
to Delphi
I remember you,
and the full moon,
and how we were enchanted
by Delphi’s magic.
The Temple of Apollo, Delphi
To Kos
I remember how you stole
pomegranates from a treeand put them on the stone ledge
with the grapes,
sweet grapes from Delphi’s vines.
We stumbled down
Parnassus’ rocky slopeclambered over
shrubs and granite
to find a place to sleep
beneath the stars.
and laid among the holly oaks.
Silver lights winked
from the edge of the distant seaWe would not know til morning
that we had made our bed
on the chasm’s edge.
In night’s chill
we warmed each otherThe full moon shone on us
We watched meteors
shower golden trails
across the heavens.
We felt the presence of the gods
understood the mystery
that brings men to this
Sacred shrine.
I keep these memories
forever in my heartAnd every trip I make
to Delphi
I remember you,
and the full moon,
and how we were enchanted
by Delphi’s magic.
W. Ruth Kozak
Delphi, Greece 1982
Thursday, September 01, 2011
THE GHOSTS OF VIRONOS STREET
This is another poem in my collection "Songs for Erato". Vironos Street, in Athens Plaka, is named for Lord Byron who used to stay at a small monastary where the Lysikratis monument is at a corner we called "The Dirty Corner" because of the dust from excavations.
I walk past #14 Vironos,
At the Dirty Corner
So many memories
#14 Vironos Street, Plaka
THE GHOSTS OF VIRONOS STREET
touch the gate
recall my life there:
Kyria Dina’s scarlet geraniums
The little spitaki in the courtyard
occupied by writers, artists,
Robbie sipping krasi
expounding on his life
as an Argentine exile
Roberto Hallberg (Robbie)
( named because of the dust of the excavation)
the tripod monument of Lysikratis,
won by a chorus at the Dionysus Theatre.
This was ancient Athen’s theatre district.
Poets lived here: Byron, Shelly…
(Vironos is Byron’s Street).
Lysikratis Monument, next to the monastary where Bryon used to visit.
Once these tables at the milk shop
were crowded with friends
sharing wine and stories.
We lived the Greek zoe,
bared our passions to the passersby.
Artists, mad poets,
writers, scholars,
expats and locals.
So much flotsam tossed on
Aegean shores.
Tales were told,
Dreams shared.
Dramas enacted on this street stage.
Relationships began and ended here.
Once I threw a wine glass at Mikalis.
Missed.
On winter nights
we sat inside the milk shop
huddled around a heater
sipping Metaxa brandy.
the Katherine Hepburn of the Corner
her maniac Canadian boyfriend,
Mary Rogers, the faded debutante,
with a bottle of vodka in her handbag
an entourage of toy-boys in tow.
my soul-brother, Robbie,
telling stories about
his beloved Buenos Aires.
We shared our lives
on that Corner,
knew each other’s secrets and
sorrows.
Now the milk shop is a ritzy café-bar
the dust of the excavations
swept away
along with the memories
Old friends have disappeared,
Left for other places.
Some taken too soon.
Yet their presence
lingers still.
Do the tourists who sit here
sipping frappe and wine
know the Corner’s history?
Can they feel the presence
of the ghosts ?
Last night as I walked,
out of Vironos Street
across the Areopagitou
I saw him,
walking in his slow amble
toward the Dirty Corner.
I recognized
his slender frame,
long grey pony-tail and beard.
Robbie looked up,
caught my tear-filled eyes.
I heard him say
in his mischievous way,
“Misbehave!”
Then, like a shadow,
he was gone.
on that little corner of Plaka.
Yes, the ghosts are there
I see them,
hear their laughter
as I pass by.
The "Dirty Corner" (now posh and expensive!)
(note: This summer when I passed by #14 Vironos and stopped to touch the gate and peer inside as I always do, the whole front was covered by an iron sheet with a bolted door, sealing all the ghosts inside!)
ODE TO THE YOUNG KOUROI
Kouros (pl: Kouroi): a representation of male youths which first appeared in the Archaic period in Greece. It was used to represent the god Apollo and typically used as a memorial for victors in the Games.
In the museum
the marble kouros
stands erect
Long locks brushing his shoulders,
eyes gazing into
an unknown future.
I see them, today’s kouroi,
standing on a street corners,
holding machine guns
in clenched fists.
Are these guns the new kamakis?
Is the broken glass they tread on
From shattered windows?
Instead of plundering hearts
in foreign ports
do arrest they roving marauders
who plunder their city?
They look young enough to be my
grandson, barely out of college
Perhaps recruited from army duties.
Is this what has become of
the young men
who once lolled in Plaka Square
chatting up tourist girls,
stealing hearts?
Do they, like their fathers,
dance like Zorbas on broken plates,
aim their golden arrows
Into the hearts of tourist girls?
Like the museum kouros
these boys face an unknown future
These beautiful
bronze-skinned kouroi
are the new
protectors of Athens
They are today's Greeks
survivors, resilient, daring,
the heroes of a new generation.
(kamaki: a three-pronged fishing spear; a term used for the young men who were out looking for girls in Greece)
Kouros, museum at Samos
ODE TO THE YOUNG KOUROI
In the museum
the marble kouros
stands erect
Long locks brushing his shoulders,
eyes gazing into
an unknown future.
I see them, today’s kouroi,
standing on a street corners,
holding machine guns
in clenched fists.
Are these guns the new kamakis?
Is the broken glass they tread on
From shattered windows?
Instead of plundering hearts
in foreign ports
do arrest they roving marauders
who plunder their city?
They look young enough to be my
grandson, barely out of college
Perhaps recruited from army duties.
Is this what has become of
the young men
who once lolled in Plaka Square
chatting up tourist girls,
stealing hearts?
Do they, like their fathers,
dance like Zorbas on broken plates,
aim their golden arrows
Into the hearts of tourist girls?
Like the museum kouros
these boys face an unknown future
These beautiful
bronze-skinned kouroi
are the new
protectors of Athens
They are today's Greeks
survivors, resilient, daring,
the heroes of a new generation.
Peaceful protestors, Syntagma Square, Athens
Kouros in situ, Naxos Greece
(kamaki: a three-pronged fishing spear; a term used for the young men who were out looking for girls in Greece)
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